Here’s the photo prompt from Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for this week’s Friday Fictioneers (flash fiction – 100 word stories).
Hide and Seek
As smoke billowed out of the kitchen window, Sarah ran down the corridor to the bedrooms; throwing open cupboard doors and kneeling under beds.
“Ivi! Come out now,” yelled Sarah, “the house is on fire.”
Potent fumes and red hot flames engulfed the doorway. Dizzy, Sarah slumped to the floor.
“Please, come to Mummy,“ she sobbed.
Two firefighters lifted Sarah by the shoulders and guided her towards the exit.
“No!” she screamed, smoke and tears burning her eyes. “My daughter. I’ve got to find my…”
“She’s safe,” said one of the men. “We found her hiding behind the lemon tree.”
(100 words)
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Sweet, Sweet. there is nothing like a Moma and her babies.
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The good old lemon tree! Happy Friday, my friend! Cheers! ☺
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All’s well that ends well.
Good piece.
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I’m so glad it didn’t turn tragic.
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Wonderful end to a wonderful story! Well done 🙂
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Yay for the lemon tree!
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Oh, I could feel the mother’s panic in this. Thank goodness the little girl was safe.
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I was so happy to read the ending that the little girl was safe. Excellent story Rachel.
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Yes, a happy ending for a change!
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Yippee!! 😀 😀
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Such an emotional piece! I was glad to get to the end. Whew…
Ellespeth
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Phew, I’m glad they found her. Great story. 🙂
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Some sort of happy end at last.. Heartwarming end.
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Well done. The emotions on the brink of panic could be felt vicerally. It’s nice to have one not so creepy ending. 🙂
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Yeah, it was good to have a happy ending!
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Great portrayal of the mother’s panic. I was holding my breath as I read this and felt a real sense of relief when it was revealed that the child was safe. Well done!
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Wretched children… 🙂
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