Thanks to Priceless Joy for hosting Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers and to Sonya for the photo.
Here’s my story:
Searching
No one really knows what happened to Mr Kendall, the eccentric old man who lived in the big mansion on the corner, but there was certainly a lot of speculation.
Some say the devil possessed his body and mind and he stabbed himself to death in a fit of rage. Others say he was murdered in his sleep by his treacherous family, in order to steal his large inheritance.
They say that some nights, especially when the moon is full, you can see the ghost of Old Man Kendall, wandering aimlessly through the graveyard, his arms held out in front of him, caressing each gravestone with his bony fingers, searching….
(110 words)
Poor guy…
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Old man Kendall seems to be searching for the person who killed him or maybe for the love of his life. Hope he can find what he’s searching for and then go into restful eternal sleep. Nice story Rachel!
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Thanks PJ.
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I hope he finds what he is …searching for.
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Great story, sad for old man/spirit Kendall
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I love it! So haunting and forlorn a tale.
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Very haunting. I hope he finds what or “who” he is searching for.
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Ooooh, spooooky!
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Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Sure!
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Creepy but great story! 🙂
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A great take on the prompt. I wonder who or what he’s searching for…?
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Awww, Lord knows what his looking for or which of the two theories are are even right.
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A very well told story. I like the uncertainty of thecause of his death, as well as what he’s searching for. 🙂
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I love the ending! Poor old Mr. Kendall. And, purpose poor whoever he is seeking.
Great take on the prompt!
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I do not for the life of me (ohh bad pun) know why I wrote “purpose.” I think I meant “perhaps.” I’m a lousy self editor with comments, until I see it published on the screen! 🙂
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This is a great story – I wonder if Mr. Kendall will find who/what he’s searching for
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I love a ghost story. Well done. 🙂
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Great story, beautifully written.
I hope Mr Kendall finds what he’s searching for 🙂
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Wonderful ghostly story… love the ending!
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed my little ghost story.
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You are most welcome 🙂
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