Here is the beautiful photo that Priceless Joy from Beautiful Words has posted this week for the Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers writing challenge. I thought it looked like a peaceful holiday destination.
Holiday Retreat
Katie stepped off the boat, and stared up at the cloud-capped mountains. She breathed in the tranquil surroundings, thrilled that she had won an all expenses paid holiday to the enchanted island of Naturelle.
When Katie’s ticket arrived she had perused the pamphlet, highlighting hot oil massages, meditation, bush walks, African drumming and sanskrit nagna yoga. Katie had never practised yoga before so she added it to her list of experiences to try.
In the bungalow, Katie unpacked and changed into her favourite Lorna Jane ensemble. She then took a leisurely stroll through the exotic tropical orchard to the lake for her first yoga session.
“Namaste,” said the instructor, bowing to the group. “Welcome to a land of pureness that absorbs the light shining within; where we become one with Mother Nature, baring our skin to the earth. Now, please remove your clothes and we will begin.”
Horrified, Katie back pedalled as fast as she could and retreated to her bungalow, where she stayed for the remainder of her holiday.
(170 words)
I’m going on a yoga retreat this weekend. Hope it’s not the same one Katie went to! 🙂
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Haha! I think I would have done the same thing that Katie did. But then, it does sound like she is too wrapped up in her clothes and their labels. Now that I think about it, maybe she should have taken those clothes off and experienced the full yoga enlightment. Very nice Rachel!
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Thanks PJ. Yes, maybe she should be with nature and just strip off. You never know, she just might enjoy the new experience!
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That’s true! She might enjoy the “freedom.” LOL!
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Ha ha! Nice twist! 🙂
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Just when I thought, what a lovely sounding place, then smack!
I am with Katie on this.
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I would paddle myself back to my room as well…LOL…Cheers!! 😀
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Great surprise ending…I definitely did not see that coming!
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Hahahaha, I DO NOT blame Katie!! I’ll definitely do the same as well. This is a lovely story.
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So beautiful, so blessed, so peaceful, so WTH?! XD This is too funny. I had to read it again to experience the dramatic irony. LOL!
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Heh, that certainly took a turn for the worse. Nicely done! And fingers crossed you won’t have the same experience this weekend!
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Ha! I would have ran too. Great Job.:)
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A very appropriately named island! Clever story and a nicely depicted main character. 🙂
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My reaction would be exactly the same! And the holiday sounded perfect up until then. Great story. 🙂
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Lol. This was pretty funny. I should’ve known when you named the island Naturelle 😉
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he he 🙂
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This has me laughing 🙂 Hope you’re enjoying your retreat experience.
Ellespeth
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The retreat was fantastic and no nudity – yay!
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I can hear the voice of experience in this one! Gee I could do with a yoga retreat right about now :p
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The yoga retreat I went on was fabulous. I’ll definitely be going again.
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was it up in Qld?
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Yes, the Glasshouse Mountains.
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Ha ha, nice ending.
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Haha that’s a nice one
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Thanks for stopping by and reading my story.
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